Hello friends, this is my first trial in writing a story……mainly looking for more critiques as I want to improve in the areas where I'm lacking. The story is still in progress so I will be writing it in parts. The below parts which has a hyperlink has been completed. I will try to upload each part once a week. Hence, request your cooperation. Mahesh -- Your comments are my strength

Part I

Part II

Part III

Part IV

Part V